All Comments on 'Aurelia - Manipulated By WHi-Fi'

Really neat idea this human wifi thing. Loved reading how the goddess was so easily manipulated. However, I thought she should have more inner struggle about it, like she realized she was some how being manipulated, but was powerless to resist. That would have been more arousing. Not sure I cared for the overly violent turn it took, but it worked anyway. Great job! I look forward to reading more of the perils of the vampiress Aurelia. Five Stars

Oh I forgot to say, definitely make a sequel. I want to read more of her being manipulated by WHi-Fi. So many cool places the story can go with that inventions.