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JayDiverJayDiverover 6 years ago
Good keep writing.

Very good story, easy to read, easy to follow. plus you got the reader involved with the characters. keep writing.

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
This was an interesting story

But,

As much fun it was to watch their forbidden interlude it still left me wanting.

I was hoping for a tale of romance instead I found a reluctant tryst, public exhibitionism, a hint of anal, mild bdsm, a cheating wife, and a brief affair.

Everything except a Romance.

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