by Bubbafats
Very good story, easy to read, easy to follow. plus you got the reader involved with the characters. keep writing.
But,
As much fun it was to watch their forbidden interlude it still left me wanting.
I was hoping for a tale of romance instead I found a reluctant tryst, public exhibitionism, a hint of anal, mild bdsm, a cheating wife, and a brief affair.
Everything except a Romance.