All Comments on 'Auto Erotica'

Long, but worth reading. I'd definitely vote for the rolling bedroom! Although that porta-potty idea is good, too.

Definitely would like a test drive in one of these!

I have no doubt this will be in the not to distant future. Nice read, thanks

I enjoyed this bit of near futurism. It was a clever concept, and you really managed to pack in the graphic sex. But at times it almost felt like you were stretching the story out for no good reason. There were odd descriptions and filler that didn't seem to drive the plot or develop the characters. I liked all the dialog, but at times even that seemed excessive. I feel like this story could have edited out at least a page worth of text without losing anything.

I thought "reveling and disheveling" was a clever turn of phrase, and I laughed out loud at "where the 'rub it' meets the road". Overall, I liked it.