by scouries
I got off more times than Mike just by reading your story again and again. Keep it (and me) up
What she thought of as her little brother took charge of her and showed her what true love was all about.
I was hoping Mike would have a go with Nicki and perhaps his sister in a threesome.
Perhaps another chapter of the three of them living together.
Thanks for the good read.
Great Valentine's story! The Black Avenger gave the story a good comedic vibe. Cheers.
You are incorrigible. Picking up a thread like auto-fellatio and weaving a story like this.
btw, for those who dont know, auto-fellatio does nt really require a very large cock, all it needs is a very flexible body. Having a larger cock helps naturally.
This story could have been expanded by a couple of thousand lines, according to your standard. It seems that you tried to finish this faster.
This got me so hard, I have always wished I was flexable enough to suck myself. Great story!
to complete this story. There are three other girls that need to see him perform his auto fellatio. Maybe he can make the same type of agreement with each of them as with his sister. Please complete this story and as soon as possible. Don't disappoint your readers.
First off, I loved the story. Great read and someone finally had the nerve to talk about the one thing that is on every guys mind. I thought it was written perfectly as with all your writings. Easy to read and never once did it get boring or slow down. Great writing as always and I will be looking forward to chapter 2,3,.... Now for some exercises......... ^-^
Nice story, kept me nice and hard, wish I could still suck my own dick like when I was younger!
I am 80, always wished I was able to selfsuck. We have all tried, I was 17 and came close.
Could do that when I was 12-13. In my case that was a LONG time ago. 5 Stars.
Perfect, real-life like, definition of the characters, credible story, etc.
Sorry that I can't give you 6 stars or more
to mix in yoga in my workouts! Ditto on all compliments directed at the panache & savior faire you weave into every tale. *****s
Tried and failed when young.... oh well! Nice story though. Like most bro-sis events, it took time to come to fruition. Keep writing!
I love eating my cum out of a pussy, and love sloppy seconds from someone else too!!
Great story - Hot - arousing and touches on a subject still denied by many. I would like to see an chapter after Nikki tries Mikey and learns the truth from them.
Thank you.
that every young man tries getting his cock into his mouth. I tried and failed--many times long ago. But I loved this terrific, well written story from one of the very best authors to be found on WW. I feel privileged to be able to read it and to vote vote it the 5 it deserves
Loved it, great story.
Knew where it was leading when she first saw his cock.
I like a lot of others played the game of I'll show you mine if you show me yours with my little sister and even her friends, of course it never went any farther than touching each other.
Even today at 69 years old my little sister is still hot.
i loved the storie i myself used to suck my own cock when i was young i could only get 2 in in my mouth but it was enuff to make myself cum
always trying to do this. I am keeping up hope. is it really a turn on to women?
I RATHER READ PREGNANT FARM AND OR ANGIES STORY ETC..SO FAR REMAIN MY FAVORITE
I love reading your stories. I have read all of them. Keep up the great work!!
WWWWoooooooooooWWWW!!!! Cum face little bro and older sis !!! Extra :!!!
Good story line...good buildup...good characters...would like to see a second part....will there be one? Hope so
About halfway through the first page, I almost stopped reading, because it was boring. But then to give your story a chance, I continued to page 2. By page 3, I was really starting to enjoy it. 4stars because of the boring first page.
This was a little long on the build-up for me, but finally worth a read. Hope part two will have the sibs and friend sharing the gravy.
Not much time to comment now. More to come later.
I hope we see the next chapter with the three of you and the auto fellatio!
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I liked the slow build-up. I could tell it was written by a guy, but you do a pretty good job getting into a young woman's head. Anyway it's a really good fantasy so ... thanks :-)
I already left a positive review. However, I think it's hard to fully appreciate a story like this that doesn't find some way to invoke the famous limerick involving a man from Nantucket.
Sort of readable? I mean, I didn't one bomb this story. Sorry, I made it about 1200 words into this story and gave up. Still, I'm lost. I like a story that starts with action, which this one does. It throws the reader right into the story - but at the expense of it making sense. Very confusing opening - to wit:
1 - Kim's bedroom, but the first voice is someone named Sarah? Okay. Then Nikki? Um, alright. Sarah again, but then Megan? Just how many people are shoved into this bedroom? Let's not forget the narrator who speaks next with "What is?" I asked... I'm guessing that Kim, though I don't know why, if she's the narrator, she's referring to her bedroom in the third person as "Kim's bedroom."
Oh wait, it's going to stay confusing because someone refers to Tim - the narrator's best friend. Tim and Nikki date. Was that Nikki who was talking about Tim? Maybe it was Megan, I don't know.
They are lounging on someone's bed (apparently Kim's? It's Kim's bedroom, right?) - but where are they? They're freshmen at Temple, okay. So they're in a dorm room? No, wait, Nikki and I are locals living at home, so they're in Kim's bedroom like the title said? Damn, dude, can it get more convoluted?
Okay, school hadn't started yet... two of the characters are Philly locals... they're all freshmen. How did Nikki and Kim meet Sarah and Megan? And, if Kim's parents had decamped for the weekend, why are they all crowded into Kim's bedroom if they have the entire house to themselves? And if they're all freshmen, were did the beer come from? They're all underaged for buying beer, let alone doing much "clubbing."
Truly, it doesn't make sense. Maybe they met during the first semester and it's now spring semester. Classes start on Tuesday, Jan. 17th, not Monday (simple internet search). Besides Jan 16th was MLK day.
The author does start to sort things out as he goes along. They went out clubbing. It's one in the morning, and the girls are in their pj's in a bedroom with a single queen sized bed? Unlikely. And much later, we learn Sarah had grown up in Kim's neighborhood .
304 words into the story and we're already juggling Kim, Nikki, Megan, Sarah, Tim, li'l bro Mike, Mom and Dad, and the unnamed, missing boyfriends? Wait, one of them is named Kyle, apparently Kim's boyfriend. Nice to cut and paste the wikipedia entry about auto fellatio complete with researcher names. Hope there won't be a quiz on this story! I don't want to miss out on Sean, sigh. Oh yeah, and Zach as we reach the 940 word count mark.
And putting "every inch of his cock into his mouth....?" Really? Talk about being able to put your head between your legs and kissing your ass good-bye - at that point, he's damn close, isn't he?
Really liked the story, and I hope you will continue the series with a threesome and later possibly introduce the other two girls into the festivities.
Thank you for sharing your imagination
great story as always, i know youre the first author on my fav list!
The lamest portion is the attempt to fit it in as a contest entry, the link to Valentines day and "romantic love" is at best tenuous.
The writing is fair to good.
The story is good enough, but as a themed contest entry it does not make it.
you will just have to make due with 5 stars... lol
Loved this story. One of the best I've read. Another Chapter?
Love the story, read it twice now on the Lit APP. Would love to see another chapter.
dude don't leave us hanging. please add another chapter to this story. it is one of the best I have read.
Please give us more, So much potential. I'd love to see Kim and Nikki licking his cock and balls with his cockhead in his mouth. I could A/F when I was 10-15. Wish I still could.
You've written that you have more to write..........and as good as you are, you have lots of people waiting to read more. This one was very hot, but also made me laugh.
great story. Loved to suck my own dick when I was younger. Used to put on a show for my wife. She thought it was hot. Let her jerk me off into my mouth once, after I came she told me to swallow it, and I did
to him sucking his own cock then fucking his sister...great fun especially with the girls discussing it...but you left us hanging...was expecting to read about him doing it in front of nikki then fucking her...I also felt there was no need to add the slutty bits at the end about making out in a bar or the cinema...detracted from the story and turned them in to perverted exhibitionists didn't need this shit...a great story and a fun read.....
I was able to suck my own cock until I got to be about 25. Whenever I would get really horny u would cum in my mouth, occasionally I would swallow it. It never tasted good, and later I would feel guilty and fear that I was gay. However, then a few weeks would go by and I would get horny again, and I would suck it again...years later it was a turn on for my wife to watch it. We even video taped it. Now I can't do it anymore. If I still could, I would. Loved this story, I have cum myself with it 3 times. I also enjoyed the brief discussion about sibling sex at the end. I had a brief affair with a first cousin...
Though this story is awesome, in most aspects and categories of literary writing, and the theme and context of sucking one's own dick is very unique and quite seldom ever given any thought or talked about, this saga puts a brightlight on the technique of auto-fellating--sucking one's own dick!! Starting about my Junior year of high school and through until I was 32 or 33 years old I was able to and did auto-fellatio my dick every month or so, when I was really horny, alone and wanted some long, drawnout sexual foreplay. In high schoool I was active and good at gymnastics, basketball, track and tumbling, always had after school jobs with most of them physically intensive. I was six feet one inch and weighed about 165 pounds soaking wet; I ate like a pig to try to gain weight but could not gain any. Sucking my dick was difficult but over time I was able many times to get my whole dick in my mouth, keeping it in my mouth until I started to ejaculate, allowing a few drops in my mouth before pulling it out; I was not very fond of the taste but it was palatable!
This story is an excellent "feel good" read. It is sensitive, sensible, romantic and a true brother and sister love story! Glorified warm-heartedness and two doting kids that actuall are IN love with their opposite gender sibling! An Idyllic brother and sister love storyof normal and usual sex, interpersonal relationship and loved being in the presence and company of their sibling incest partner! Like several reader's comments I could nitpic the few errors or oversights scattered sparingly through the story but that is not something I do unless the errors are many and glaring. That said I am very pleased with the full context and intent of the story, although the introduction details are over done. My one disappointment is the story did not finish with a bang! Sister Kim many times thought and make known she would forever and ever be pleased with her brother Mike's cock and lifestyle (although she recognized they would never marry (it is possible though)! The story should have had some definition, such as they become a couple, man and wife style, or they agree to having a baby or two! Kim's girlfriend Nikki is an irritation to their--Kim and Mike's--unity and all outside influences should stay...OUT!!
I really enjoyed this story. A little slow in the beginning but once it got going, it stayed hot the rest of the way.
As someone who when he was younger, could suck his own cock when I had become extremely horny and was in a kinky mood, I've got to call bullshit on some of the story.
Being limber from swimming is not the same as being limber enough to suck yourself. At no time during swimming or warm ups prior to swimming do you try to bury your face in your crotch. You need to work on different muscles in order to relax them enough to blow your own dick. Yet, this swimmer, in a VERY short time, supposedly got the job done right away. It takes months to take even half of your cock in your mouth and that's after a daily workout.
And the most ridiculous thing was when he took his entire cock down his throat. He had a big dick so I'm thinking that it was above average which would put it at least 7 inches or more. Now if you are sitting there in front of your PC reading this, move your head down towards your dick until it hits your chest. Notice how your neck (and throat) have to curve quite a bit. If anybody can tell me how you can get a 7 inch cock that's fairly straight down a curved throat, I'll be glad to hear it.
Since he seems like he's never gone down on another guy, how the hell can he deep throat a 7 inch dick after only a week or so? Most gay guys can't deep throat a 7 inch dick and they've been practicing for years.
Too much scrutiny on the how from other commenters. Just allow yourself to go with it. It's a lot more fun that way. However, a note to anyone reading the story or the comments. I think this has less to do with age and more with motivation and maybe weight to some degree. I could get at least some of my slightly below average cock in my mouth and lick well below the mid point until I was 60. Have not tried recently. But with a hot 19 year old spectator, I'm willing to bet I could still get on my game face and give it a good go. LOL
Even though there were a few problems with the story, the editing and such, I still loved it. I stuck with it to the end, which is rare for me.
Gina
Your essential premise, that auto fellatio exists, is true and actually, while not rampant, occurs more often than the statistics you used would imply. I grew up in a neighborhood where a guy not too long into puberty was expected to be able to auto fellate without excessive embarrassment. (Some embarrassment was to be expected, at least at first until you got used to the idea of being watched.) It was a local "right of passage to manhood".
Being able to demonstrate almost at will was important to us. You had to be able to perform before a live audience, of either or mixed genders, even if the audience consisted of only a single person. The ability was teachable during our teen years, as there were always mentors of either gender willing to help. "Hands on" assistance was encouraged if there was any problem meeting the goal of at least one-third of the erect length. A complete "deep throat" was rare, although sufficient alcohol, liberally applied was efficacious.
The fun usually ended during the late teens, when guys finished their growth spurts and became too stiff to follow through. We kept trying, if only because the girls urged us to try, try, try again.
And what were the girls doing as a counterpart? It turned out that girls were more supple than boys, but they suffered from not having the "natural extension" of a penis. Only the most determined and flexible could perform auto cunnilingus, although any male in the area was glad to assist the effort. Most guys were very enthusiastic in their offers of assistance.
Indeed, after watching a girl try, some guys who had been unable to perform were inspired to push just that little bit further to attain their own success. Especially when the girl added a little extra emphasis, either physically or by suggesting a suitable reward for the accomplishment.
Aside from the ephemeral social approval, fellatio and cunnilingus were considered to be excellent prizes for success. While some guys were reticent about performing fellatio other than auto fellatio, everybody liked the cunnilingus aspect. For that, gender was pretty much irrelevant.
I never had a problem with fellatio, as I considered that if I was willing to fellate myself, how was another penis any different? And my first two wives benefited greatly from my training.
My first wife suffered from a tipped uterus and genital intercourse was quite uncomfortable for her without a liberal application of ingestable pain killer. Dosed by sufficient quantities, she considered anything to be fair game... The key, of course, was to refrain from over-dosing. It was much less fun when she was not an aware participant. Usually her hangover masked any genital discomfort until she got over the hangover.
But what worked out best was good old cunnilingus. She'd never experienced it before we married and at first considered it dirty and immoral. (I never did figure out where that notion came from. Her mother was exuberantly in favor of it, although that's another topic entirely.) But after her first cunnilingual orgasm she also became quite enthusiastic about it. Life became a lot more fun after that. She wasn't insatiable, but definitely loved multiple streaming orgasms, cumming until she essentially passed out from exhaustion.
Yes, I tried in my younger days but was never able to do it.....
Really liked this story. I could get 2-3" into my mouth when I was younger. Tried it when I reached middle age and almost threw my back out. LOL.
While I've never actually had sex with my sister, we did play around a bit when we were in our teens. Now that we are older, I kinda wish I'd pushed it farther then. Who knows where we would be now. On the Autofellation thing, yea, I've done it quite a few times, fairly regularly actually, when I was in my teens and pretty much into my mid twenties. It's kinda hard to explain to someone who has never experienced it. The first couple of times there is a part of you that doesn't want to consummate and a part of you that wouldn't stop if a bomb went off. Obviously, since I admitted I had done it quite a few times, I got to where I enjoyed unloading into my mouth and actually got to where I enjoyed swallowing it. I am not gay, I am happily married to a very sexy lady and to this day, I still wish I could still do it. I think that is why I enjoy reading about it. It helps me relive the experience. Yours is probably the best of the genre I have seen so far. Maybe you could write a few more since it is such a poorly written about experience. I know I'd love to read it if you did. A big THANKS for a great story and for giving me so much to think about when I'm away from home.
This story brought back memories of the fun I had as a teenager sucking my own cock. Unfortunately that is no longer possible. Your stories are always well crafted. I especially enjoy the buildup and getting inside the characters head. Of course you re one of my favorite authors. Glad that your are over the long period of illness.
I could suck myself until I was about 45 so that part of the story isn't as surprising but brought back some really exciting and arousing memories. Adding the interaction with his sister and friends was brilliant. Best erotic story I have ever read!
I've read several of your stories now & all of them were arousing and well written. You have a way of describing scenes and scenarios that cause sexual tension and arousal. You have quite the imagination and I find your words erotic and stimulating. Please continue your stories. You said you would like for readers to tell you what they would like to see you write about. I'd like to hear you write about 2 old friends (male and female) that were never intimate but run across each other later in life and well....Use that talented imagination of yours and curl my toes. I look forward to that story.
Great story, loved the tension in the first pages until she watched him jerk off in the bathroom. Loved the description of him sucking his own cock and winning the bet, and the fucking was even better.
Love your writing style, and incest stories, too.
I would love to read a conclusion to this hot sexy love story. Does he fuck Nikki? Do he and sis stay together like she dreamed about. These days having babies between siblings is no big deal with genetic counseling.
I read this the first time a few years ago and can't stop myself from re-reading it on a regular basis. If there's a better story on Literotica, I haven't read it yet. I surely would like to read a sequel.
When I was younger and in the Army I could Fellate myself. I was just under 30, fit and flexible. Married and enjoyed a healthy sex life but spent a lot of time away unaccompanied on tours. Of course where we were sent there were not many females around. I was at a place with no females, so we had to improvise.
Well one way I could climax was to put my cock in my mouth and I used to swallow. Not a bad taste and supposed to be good for you.
This is how I achieved it.
I had my own room so a bonus. I would lay on my bed which was against a wall, head on my pillow, then turn round 180 degrees and put my legs up the wall so I was 'upside down'. Hope you can picture it. It doesn't take much for a healthy person to be aroused. Once erect and the body is bent over the erection is not far from your mouth. Once in my mouth it was only a question of time and resourcefulness before I climaxed. A good means to an end and made a change from conventional methods.
Us fellows are lucky we can suck ourselves, females can't and there nothing a lady likes more than a clitoris being licked, blown and chewed. Electric devices are not the same, might return an objective.
REgards
Yup it can be done in that position. I have a birth defect that makes my lower body weak but really flexible. When I was a teenager of course I tried it. Like you wrote I imagine almost all guys do. I liked the story, but would liked more dialogue between the siblings, maybe less with the girls. Well you didn't tag it as romance so probably just me,
i had no problem fellating myself as a younger man i deepthroated myself once i could not believe how much i enjoyed it cock cream exploding down my throat as i kept swallowing my own semen
I discovered it when I was around 15 years old. Did anytime I could till I was 32 when it was no longer possible for me. Wish I still could. I've been married for 48 years and sex has never been a problem. Really like heterosexual sex and my wife is still very sexually enjoyable, but nothing can match the pleasure you can give yourself by sucking your own dick. I've never even considered gay sex or sucking another man's cock, but I'd do my own in a heartbeat if I still could. The great divider was the first time I did it, do I swallow my own cum or not. In the end, it wasn't even a real decision. It felt so good I simply couldn't bring myself to take my mouth off my cock even after I started shooting my own cum into my own mouth. No I didn't like the taste of it, but I did swallow it every single time. It does become addictive. I had to do it again and again regardless, but never as a replacement for heterosexual sex with my wife, but in addition or as a compliment to it, but not with my wife. She was a pretty good cocksucker even though she would never swallow, but not as good as me. It's like nobody could fuck you as well as you because only you know what feels really good. The brother/sister thing is an incomplete fantasy for me. My sister and I shared a bedroom till I was around 8 and she was 6. I'm sure that led to occasional sexual encounters when mom and dad were out of town later when I was 16 and she was 13. More a touchy/feely, curiosity/inspection/groping thing. We both enjoyed it, but it never led to sex. It might have in our 40's when we were both going through dry spells, but it didn't. We did talk about it, but the incest taboo was too great for her. As for me, I would have fucked my sister in a heartbeat. This story had more than a little appeal to me because it touched on several hot memories of mine.
A guy having a cock in his mouth, even if it's his own, is pretty gay and reading about it should be a turn off to any straight guy. The stuff between the brother and sister was good, the other stuff I skipped.
Why did`nt you tell the story of all three of them getting it on?
Kim: "Before I go any farther with my story let me just say that I'm not a slut!"
She then proceeds to describe that she really is a slut. "I've only done it with four guys in my whole life." She 19! More guys than a lot of girls that are twice her age. What load of crap.
Great story.
The idea that a guy could actually suck his own cock....*fans self*...amazing!
If I had brother and he was built like that and he could do that, I’d be all over him.
Feel free to continue the saga. Pleeeeeeeze 🤩
Not enough!!
Fantastic story. Great story. Keep on this street, fantastic job.
I like it I wanted to know if they had gone through with their plans. Can we get a part 2?
Absolutely awesome story indeed. I have often wondered what it would be like to suck my own dick. But having my sister watch is even more intriguing, then I could have her beautiful body all to myself. I hope there's a sequel to this story, maybe where there could be a threesome with her friend.
you should add more to this story because it isnt finished . like did the sister friend ask an watch .
Would love a follow up story with the brother sucking his cock for all the girls and some other guys sucking cock for the girls as well as sodomy.
I read some of the reviews posted & agree. While it was a fun read, it just stopped almost mid thought.
Cut from a five to a four.
Bill S.
excellent. my back hurts now, time for more stretching exercises to limber up. LOL
At various points in my life I have been able to suck the head of my cock in to my mouth and honestly who is going to stop when about to cum ? ? Didn't taste great but I got used taking my load and swallowing...also came in handy going down on girls I already shot my load in...
Orgasmic! Tried auto but no way could I reach my 6 incher. My gf asked me after we’d 69’d. I told her I tried - no way. She asked if she could help. She told me to get next to the bed with my shoulders on the floor and my ass up on the mattress. With the side of the bed she had me bend at the waist so my toes reached the floor. When she saw that wasn’t even close she put her hand around my cock and jacked me til I came in my open mouth. It was ok but a lot of work. She liked it cause she liked to control me. I never complained. Please write and let us “hear” Nikki ask Mike and then “watch” with Kim as Nikki “watches” Mikey and then, bonus, he fucks her. Good descriptive writing. I felt like I was there. The fly with a hard-onon the wall!!
Thought I was going to be bored by sister brother story. I prefer mother son stories. Was I surprised! Great built up and story line. Believable. Would love a continuation with Nikki. And after all. There is a mom. Hehe.
Yes, I used to self-suck when I was in my teens. I could get about two inches in. Hours of entertainment! Later I was in a car accident, which affected my upper back and neck. I never regained enough flexibility after that.
Good story. I hope you write a sequel.
Great story & well expressed. I would have loved another chapter though.
Bill S.
Super fun and sexy story, vut where is the rest of it? Lol...... thank you for the entertainment.....