All Comments on 'Autumn Love'

Fair idea, but not well written and in serious need of fleshing out. Reads more like an outline or a sketch than a story.

An editor would have been of tremendous help here.

I loved it, being a mid-fifties whie male, married to a late forties black lady, I can relate to every part of this story. Our event happened after attending a wedding and whilst driving home late that night we reached the top of a hill and pulled over to admire the view. One thing lead to another and we ended up making love in and out of the car. Your story brought back good memories. More please.