All Comments on 'Autumn Pt. 01 Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Improvement

I enjoyed the first version of this story, but I think I like some of the characters better this time around. Especially the mom.

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In the spring of 2020, I began working on what I hope will be the final, and best, version of Autumn, with reworks of Summer, Spring, and Winter potentially to follow. Progress has been intermittent but continues. When I'm finally ready to share it, I'll do so on a new account...

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