All Comments on 'Autus Ch. 01'

Good beginning. Intriguing too. Please continue.

please tell me what storys you are still working on

Please continue. Perhaps give Gwen 2 to make it more interesting.

I get that this was meant to be an introductory scene and all but that doesn't get aeay from it being boring. Nothing happens in this work which is odd considering your old subject matters

this story is on another site posted by someone with a different name. so you might want to give credit to the real author instead of posting it as your own work.

I am on three sites currently. Hentai Foundry under the name somewhosegod, and Futanari Palace as Tósaku no Kishi and here under my normal name.

This is truly a fantastic series! It was such a treat to find it =)

Your writing needs hella work though. Or at least get an editor. :/ don't mean to be a Grammar Nazi because I can deal with a few incorrect spellings or typos, but you left out entire words and phrases.

Just something to consider.

Yeah I know, it's a real issue when I get into something. I start to write in a frenzy and my mind ends up skipping words quite a bit. Trust me, it's no where near as bad as it used to be. I do intend to go through this, and other stories, at some point to correct a lot of these glaring issues.

This is the kind of stuff I have been waiting to embark upon for so long. The story which captures the subtle actions, details and mood of the characters in it! Splendid work :)

You are such a tease though, I am so excited, I am going to binge read hehe!

*Story starts with “2020”* me: “oh this aged well”