All Comments on 'Ava and Marcus Ch. 02'

Your short burst style of writing is fine. You have me intrigued but conflicted. The idea of forcing someone to face their fantasies sounds good but is dangerous in many ways. You've had Marcus acknowledge that, so please don't lose sight of it. Personally, I don't like mirrors either and would be so pissed at him trying to force that. Quite the bucket of cold water. I wish him a better response. I look forward to seeing how Marcus balances his love and respect for Ava with his desire to bring out her inner kink.

This chapter is so hot and sexy!!!! More please and soon! Thank you.

An opening paragraph or two. Sure not a story worth reading.

It's a proper tease and I am loving it. Pl continue. And don't take too long. You write well.

This story is very good even in short bursts but please keep it coming and reveal to us if Ava gives in and looks in the mirror. Marcus is treading a fine line.