All Comments on 'Avalanche'

Now for the third of your contributions in my experience. So calm and quiet in its approach, so gentle in its execution - so effective. If all your writing is as this is, then I can see why men's magazines rejected them - they are not "macho"! Have women's magazines rejected them?

A good plot, a simple and realistic situation and ending. Your readers can ask for mothing more!

I so wanna **** you right now... that was good. one of my fantasies