by averagewifey
Was she threatening Jennifer because she believed she was fucking her husband? Was she trying to seduce Jennifer into a lesbian affair?
Was she suggesting a threesome with Jennifer and her husband?
And what kind of manipulative, self serving bitch reads her husband's journal? It couldn't have been mistaken for a checkbook. Does she make a habit of going through her husband's things? Is she that insecure? Not a nice person. This story isn't - a story that is. It's more like an opening paragraph or the opening salvo of a battle. Simply not enough information nor is it clearly enough written to make for a worthwhile read. Bad story telling.
Clear what's happening. He left the journal next to the checkbook - so she didn't have to hunt for it. Not just the two females who're forming a team either. Fun read & innovative. 5*.
I could not stop reading until I got to the end. The explanations are numerous. As Anonymous / Intriguing mentioned, there are several. I personally believe that Kathleen had a sexual desire for Jennifer, which she expresses at the end, with the stroking of the hair, and the offer of the shower. 5 *'s. Now I have to go over all the other "Average Wifey Files!"
You get marks for subtlety but where do we go from here? So far this is an incident but not a story.
This story makes you think. That is good. Very emotional, we missed you *****