All Comments on 'Avery Unbound'

great story write a second chapter please

loved this story - thanks. this hit home for me big . could i ask for more of this dreamy story ?? again thanks for your continued writing here. hugs from me.

I would love to become a woman and mother and marry a wonderful woman like that .. it would be a dream come true ..

Weird but good. Well written!

I wish there was a pill to become a woman! I was mesmerized with the story not stopping til the amazing ending for Avery, a woman to love and a baby to give birth to!!!! Motherhood and a loving family! If that pill was out there I'd take it in a heartbeat!

I greatly enjoyed this story. You are a good writer. I think it is every, or nearly ever y, transwoman's dream to have a baby of her own., suckling at her breasts.

Extremely well written and enjoyed that it didn't focus on sex

I would volunteer for a one way man to woman. As she felt he body changing sounded so exciting. I would love to experience these changes myself.

Where do I sign up...

My only nagging question is that I don’t understand why Jacob wasn’t at the hospital for the birth. He managed to find the time to show up knowing he was going to get laid but I guess he was just too busy to give a crap about the human life he helped to create. What a douchebag!

Good laid back story.a fun 4 star read.

Bill S.