All Comments on 'Avery's Desire Pt. 01'

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Anonymousover 6 years ago

Can hardly wait for the next chapter . . .

Great start to an epic story !

Anonymousover 6 years ago

OMG so Hot!

This story is amazing, one of the best that I've read so far. I need more. What happens next? Please write more, it's awesome. Great job.

Anonymousover 6 years ago

Very interesting. Wonder how sincere Brian is ? And Mikey probably won't be happy. Looking forward to more

kurlansky over 6 years ago

Great start

Avery is caught between 3 men at the moment it seems. Brian, the impossible dream, and mikey, the douche ex. I wonder how Mikey will react when he heard about Brian and whether Brian will follow through. Avery is a hottie thought it seems. Excited to see more

JayHlovesC2018 over 6 years ago

Such a great story

Can't wait to read the other chapters. this story is so good.

Oliveora over 3 years ago

Oh my too good

I see the potentiality of a nice plot

Jerome_Plamondon over 2 years ago

Unprotected sex with a touring musician. That’s a groupie, not love.

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Hello, my name is Chance. I'm a 44 year old (45 in October) gay man, happily married with three kids. My oldest just graduated from college and the two youngest are in high school. I also have a dog, and one cat that is my own, and multiple strays that I feel the need to feed ...

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