All Comments on 'Avery's Desire Pt. 03'

Was not expecting Rick to be in love with Avery. I hope he confesses tomorrow morning when he is sober. Did Rick and mikey have a thing before? Can't wait to see how the story develops and if Brian will show up again. I hope Rick and Avery get together though

Rick and Mickey seem to have some history. Really want to see how this plays out.

OMG this is so good! What a plot twist I so did not expect Rick to fall for Avery! What's up with Brian too? Did he just use Avery or did something happen to him? Please write more you have me hooked now lol

Rick and Avery together is unexpected. Would be cool if they got together and rubbed it in mikeys face. He's such a dick. Seems like Rick and mikey have some kind of history though....is Brian going to come back in the picture? I kinda hopes he doesn't now. I like Rick better even though he seems to be kind of a mess. I wonder if he is cool with the fact that he likes guys or if it's something he denies. Youve definitely got me invested

That's a really good love triangle going. i bet mikey is shitting himself right now lol

cant wait to see what happens next.

Girl I have given you 5 stars for every chapter so far. Sis you know how to write a story. Genius ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ . Its been months since I've had a story HOOK ME on this site. So THANK YOU