All Comments on 'Avery's Desire Pt. 06'

This was really good. I loved the end how avery and rick are still good friends even if avery isnt really in love with him but still loves brian. and what was that dream? is avery starting to fall for rick too now? im excited to see which one he ends up with in the end. good job keep writing.

A great chapter which is, I hope, a step on the way to the realisation by Rick and Avery that they are in love with each other. Now all that is needed is for there to be some sort of reconciliation with Mikey and the four original band members to be together again as friends.

im glad they are looking for a new band member. Mikey needs to be out of the picture. he is so not good for anyone avery espcially.

I almost cried when Rick told avery that he didnt have to love him back that he just wanted to be near him. that is the sign of true love.

I was wondering about mike and Rick. Did something happen between them when they were younger cause it kind of sounds like there was something there. i dont think rick has really had any gay feelsing before avery so it makes me wonder if mike had raped him too and thats why he hates mike so much.

I am feeling all the feels. Great writing. So authentic.