All Comments on 'Avery's Desire Pt. 12'

Hope Rick and Avery have a happy ending together.

I hope Mikey gets locked up and they throw away the key! What he did was insane!

Hopefully Avery is ok and him and Rick can live happily ever after.

this chapter has made me cry cus i can totally feel what the people in the story feel which makes it even better when you can feel what they are feeling just by reading it i love you sweetheart love your hottie

Your writing is amazing, the emotions you can draw out of a person when they read your stories always keeps me coming back for more. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time, it's a roller coaster of emotions honestly. I was so furious with Mikey that even I wanted to kill the bastard and then I cried for Avery and Rick, made me feel like I was there seeing all of this happen. Keep writing, you have a huge fan waiting for more. Thank you

Thank you so much guys. Chapter 13 is in the works. I know I write slow but I have kids at home and plus I want to post something that I can be proud of so I take a lot of time to write and edit it. But I'm about half way through chapter 13 and should be done soon. Thanks again for your support!

Just wanted to say what a great tale you are weaving. Has kept me on the edge of my seat and I never want to get to the end of a chapter. Please don’t ever give up writing. Thank you so much.

I hope chapter 13 is coming soon!!!

Where have you gone? We are all dying for your next chapter hope all is ok with you please submit soon or at least leave a comment to let us know you haven't deserted us again hope all is ok with you can't wait for next chapter

Sorry that I havn't posted anything for a while. I am almost finished with chapter 13 but I had some personal issues come up and was in the hospital for a couple of weeks following surgery but I am home now and working hard on finishing the chapter. Thank you for all your support, it really means a lot :)

The assault and rape scene made my skin crawl. Your writing is phenomenal.