All Comments on 'Avril’s Ploy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good

While I definitely liked Troy with Gideon as well as Brad fucking the guys,I can't help but feel sorry for Arvil since his partner won't give him a monogamous relationship anytime soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good

I forgot to include that while I found the Chinese guy fucking someone hot I feel sorry for his partner since he was rocking back and forth

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great Story!

Really loved this story, great chzracters as always. You touch on so many underaddressed aspects of relationship and sexuality.

Thank You

KNM2001KNM2001about 2 years ago

I wonder what Tim was feeling as he was being fucked since he had tears in his eyes

Foggybottom81Foggybottom814 months ago

Sorry I missed the dinner and party sex. Would love to have been invited.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...