All Comments on 'Awaiting a Kiss'

Excellent! Romance stories here have a tendency to emphasize the sexual element to the detriment or exclusion of the emotional connection, and you've done a wonderful job of capturing romance itself entirely in a moment of intimacy. Kudos.

I admire your writing but many of your word choices and phrases seemed incorrect for the context. It is unclear to me if this is the start of a series or a completed story.