All Comments on 'Awakening'

by WetBlossom

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Nice First Story

About a First Time Fuck. Kinda romantic, kinda erotic. Good start!

wdelanderwdelanderabout 13 years ago
sweet, sexy, and wonderful

Just what a first-time story should be.

H.H.MorantH.H.Morantabout 13 years ago
Nice story

The guy's failure to use a condom is not sexy - and using one doesn't have to detract from the erotic nature of the story

wjthermanwjthermanabout 13 years ago
Amazing 'Awakening'!

One of the best stories I've ever read! Perfectly believable with realistic and well-written pacing and exploration of the mix of emotions and desires faced in this situation. You did a fantastic job, and I'm looking forward to your next story (maybe a continuation with these two?).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Very good, very real

This situation happens so much. Someone has to make the first move. Others in the same situation will be encoraged by this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I would've stopped when she said "no" the first time.

And that's why I'll never get laid.

Mm, yeah, OK story. Keep at it, thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
sooo sexy!

definately one of the best on this whole website! ill have to read that agian!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Excellent!

More!

Lynn_MXXLynn_MXXalmost 13 years ago
Five Stars

Very good indeed WetBlossom, don't leave it too long before you post your next story. And ignore that single, negative comment

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 12 years ago
Great story

Great story, very real in the way things do happen.

He seduced her in such a way that proved she did care for him as much as he cared for her.

Getting past a girl/womans fear of losing their virginity is best by using patiences and love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love the realism

I feel like the story captures how my first time went, along with the thoughts that might have gone through both of our heads at the time. Thanks for the story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

someone suggest me same or similar story like this one...

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