by juci_luci
I really liked your story except for the blow job, I don't know why all these stories have to have a virgin sucking some guys cock and eating his cum like candy, it just makes the story unbelievable.
Great 1st time, straight to the point, could do with being a bit longer.
Direct and nicely written. I hope she lingers a little longer next time
Hi, Luci,
It was a fast paced story and I liked it. Short and sweet. I am looking forward to tomorrow (Awakening Ch. 02)
Thanks for writing.
Joe