by shakenmartini55
she was glad to be out of an overbearing marriage and then jumps into a lesbian relationship just like it?you started her off as being more about getting control back over her life now you have her giving it up again just like that.
...that you added another chapter. The rewrite of Fetishville is much improved - deeper, sexier, kinkier.
Don't listen to the previous comment - take this girl where she wants to go! Maybe her loser of a husband just didn't have a clue. - Emma obviously does.
Can't wait for Chapters 3-20.