All Comments on 'Awakening Miranda'

Loved the pantyhose/wank scene. Nice to see you writing in the present again. You certainly have come back strong after a long time doing "research"? Another 5 from me.

I have tasted the cane but once and would love to be so punished again and can be contacted at catchthefirststone1@gmail.com if any lady is so interested

The unnecessary lengthy scene involving secondary characters is kind of boring. The story is about Miranda - Baker. You should have better taken the story directly to them.

loved it..brilliant.what else can I say,but 'let's have more'

after checking comment that you should centralise on 2 main characters,and reading a lot of your other

stories I think that would be right way to go,but not in this case..to be honest I can't fault this story in

anyway..will you be adding to it. I very much hope so.