All Comments on 'Awakening Pt. 11'

It was good

I hope you continue the story

Consider making the the parts longer as well

Need better pacing of the story as well

Moves too fast sometimes

You can make the storytelling a lot better as well

preference. More story less stroke.

Can't wait to see where the stories goes. Great job in writing and imagination.

Keep the stories coming I love it! I literally am on here every day so I can wait for a new chapter!! Love the story line it compliments the erotic parts so well.

cannot wait for more.

You'd asked for requests in 10, and I thought of 2. I like the misdirection approach some of the antagonists have used. And the reality warping powers emptied by time stopping and teleportation combined with the create and destroy vision temple made me wonder if we'd get any Multiverse type action. Like having sex to save reality while a visible yet intangible parallel of yourself fights to destroy reality. Orgy vs holocaust whosever passion is strongest decides the fate of the universe.

... and being a 12, makes your story a 6.6 - so very close to perfect...:-)