by TheInnerBeast
I read your last story over a month ago and would frequently check and see if you have added more. Needless to say, I was elated to find that you had! It's obvious that you listened to our feedback, (the communications that Caelin and Kelly had were very well written) but you still kept the story yours which can be hard for authors to do. 5/5 for me! Hoping to see more soon!
Absolutely loved it!
Well written and edited.
Dare we hope for more?
Part 2 left me shaking along with the characters..... WOW! The adrenalin from the fighting leading to sexual satisfaction left me breathless......anxiously waiting on part 3.
Ask and you shall receive! Just published parts 3 and 4, because each one of those are a little shorter. Writing part 5 now. If you guys like these, I'll keep writing them. I very much appreciate the feedback, positive and negative. Please keep it coming.
I can see why you turned this into a story series. Keep going!
Excellent plot, great characters, and wonderful romantic atmosphere all add up to a great story. Five stars.