by TheInnerBeast
I cried again. This is such a wonderful story.
The sex and connection is beautiful and hot and raw. And the emotion kills me. I’m smitten with them both.
Thank you ,
T
Well written,
Hot,
Detailed,
Erotic,
Sensitive.
The very first part of the story was my favorite, but this is a great piece that I am happy to have read and I'll probably re-read again.
Well done!
You are a talented writer and since I have started to read your stories, I have noticed how you have also become more confident as a writer... the characters are evolving as is the author. I look forward to more of Caelin and Kelly. Thank you for sharing
What a wonderful story! Such talent you have in writing. Please continue!!
EmeraldGreenWhore et al, thank you all for your continued comments and reads. It's very encouraging to get feedback of all sorts. This chapter was difficult to write, as you may imagine. There's more cumming in the continued story of Kelly and Caelin.
And so the wait is over and it was definitely worth it.
Thank you for taking the time to ensure this chapter is perfect.
It truly is an emotional piece but necessary for these two to realise the love growing between them.
May I also say your work as an Author is getting better with each story.
Looking forward to the next chapter with eager anticipation. 💚
I thought you might have abandoned this series. Thank you for continuing this! It only keeps getting better!
Just found your series. Wonderful! Thank you for your service.
Wasn't expecting to hear about the loss of her son but knew Kelly had been holding something bad inside. I'm glad she was able to let it out. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter to see where this goes.