All Comments on 'Awakening the Deluca Family'

this was great. I would definitely like to read more about this family and their incredibly hot misadventures

amazing story, I loved it from beginning to end and would love to hear more about this wonderful family.

SURPRISE!

...well probably not, i suppose you kinda expect my comments by now :P

anyway another awesome story, you never disappoint me <3

really liked the hot tranny mom on female daughters stuff, very well written

it was very hot, a good build-up, seduction was also excellent and of course your above-standards sex scenes >:)

also kudos to you for 'no spelling errors' :P although in the final scene i felt like the names were bit switched/mixed up

don't really know what else to say, beside my usual ( fair/earned !) flattery

one more thing: i recently had a kind of kinky idea, feel free to use it in the future if you like it.

it's when 2 girls are having sex and one of them says something a bit 'rude'', she curses, ... the other girl asks "do you kiss your mother with that mouth?" and she says that she does a lot more with her mom than just kiss her. and you could describe the mom/daughter thing in a few sentences or in a longer scene, your choice.

just an idea that popped up, sorry if it is a bit too 'kinky', thought i'd make the suggestion, you can judge yourself.

your biggest fan, (no flattery <3)

ThatLoneWolf

The deluca family should travel to the island of dickgirls!!

this is an amazing story combining two of my biggest turn-ons incest and dick girls thanks and once again it is amazing

there was some stuff that i forgot to mention, but i'd like to tell it anyway

really loved the 'warm' family, fuzzy feelings N such, also happy ending :D bad ending is kind of a turn off for me personally

lesbian scenes were also great, although i kinda should have expected it, since you write those too :P

also when i thought of janine and her wife i later thought that you would do pretty well with a romance story

anyway thanks for reading

I was hoping she would make at least one of her daughters pregnant ..maybe the next chapter ??

As they are a normal life family, have the daughters turn mom onto internet sites on transexuals looking for relationships and have them all find lovers. Moma can even find a woman who loves transexuals and falls in love herself. The Deluca family can become a lesbian, transexual paradise.....also, they all have to crave eating cum and snowballing....sooooo hot.....

Almost forgot.....great story....

I loved the story. I do hope that you will continue the story or do a sequel. It would be nice to see where the sex life of the daughters goes now. Will they date guys or girls or try to find TS ? And now that Janine's sex life has been turned back on after her one and only lover has passed away when Tera was born; will she start to find a new lover and remarry? And will her lover be another woman this time or a man or a TS ? There is much that could be written on this family to be posted to this site. Keep up the great writing.

stories I have read in this site. Keep up the great work

This is my first ever reading of a TS story; coupled with an incest storyline had me intrigued from the beginning. I love how you established the scenario before detailing the characters sexual conquests and obvious appetites! Continue with the De Luca family...they are a sexual force and compelling.

Possible directions:

a) Rachel and Roseanna seduce Deb Chu since her name has already been mentioned and introduce her to Janine?

b) Janine's co-workers; a late night at work and the fun begins with a sexy, red haired co-worker?

c) Another "love interest" for Janine

d) Simply branch out the De Luca family to individual scenarios.

You write very well. I are a favorite and I will continue to read and learn more about the sexual world of TS loving!!

All I can say is... WOW!!! This story is very well written and should absolutely be continued!

This story must go on. This is a great story, and it will one of my favorites

This really had to be a bitch to write and I can only imagine the editing on your end to

get it just so perfect.

Keep up the great storylines

I absolutely love this story! This needs a sequel!

I sincerely hope you continue writing. This is by far one of the most captivating stories I have read. Please continue your work!

That story kept my throbbing black cock hard as hell!

thanks to you for this amazing story. I want continue writing more stories like this.

Great story can't wait for the next chapter. hope it comes out soon

Your writing is so succinct, thoughtful, descriptive, and offers the reader to 'participate' that although the end was perfect, it was still a let down. Thank you...

Great work! Excellent story progression, wonderful descriptions, and captivating sex scenes. hope to see more of this!

Absolutlely love your writing. Wasn't sure about T-girls but the way your writing makes them come to life is wonderful. The characters in this story are believable, and the sex is well done. Keep up the good work!

Great story....very believable! Would have liked details about Janine popping Rachel's and Tera's cherry pussys!!! While you didn't go into depth on Janine's marriage to Ella, it was hot to imagine a sexy shemale fucking babies into genetic girls. I'd love to read a 2nd chapter about the Deluca girls begging their she-daddy to get them pregnant and Janine giving into the girl's desires, giving each daughter several babies over the next decade.

need another chapter to where the girls want to get pregnant by janine

This is a great story, but . . . !

Could I suggest that, if your story is going to be more than about two pages, you split it into chapters?

A six or eight page story is great, but your readers, and I am sure that there are many of them, may not always have time to read the entire story at one visit. Finding where you left off is easier if it is at a chapter end.

This is, as I have said, a suggestion and NOT a criticism!

this story was riveting and i would love to see much more of the deluca family.

specially, as others have said "I'd love to read a 2nd chapter about the Deluca girls begging their she-daddy to get them pregnant and Janine giving into the girl's desires, giving each daughter several babies over the next decade."

i to would love to see the daughters ger pregnant from "mom" as well as their conquests outside the family like rachel finally nailing Carla Silvers and Janine taking one of her coworkers or supervisors. or you could have one of the girls bring home a lover just like dear ol mom :) and have some girl on tgirl on tgirl fun

this is an awesome story, and would love to hear more tails of the entire family. I think it would make a great series as there is so much that can be developed in so many ways. Hoping that at some point in the future, you will revisit this amazing family

This story is extremely erotic !!! I have to change into a dry thong now, as the one I'm wearing is totally drenched with my "sweet cummies".....Mmmm. !!! Thanks so very much.

SissyCrissy.............xoxoxo

Normally I am not into transsexual stories, but this was so well written, so erotic and so captivating, I have to say it is one of my favorites.

I must have cum at least four times reading this story...I think I will cum one more time as I join the gang bang.

transgender incest, what a lovely idea! thank you for your writing.

Its very good. Please continue on it

As always great story from you.

wish there was more to this story

That was as hot a story as I have ever read. I had a hardon from the start to finish. Fantastic read.

Second story I have read of yours, I’m hooked.

sexy ending just wanted more detail so longer for the sex parts

Ending seems to be rushed

I would love more of this. Definitely going into my favorites list!