All Comments on 'Awakenings: A Fantastic Journey'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Dude, you know your shit!

You were paying attention in science class, dude. Hell, they don't teach most of that shit even in science class! Really enjoyed your story - made a lot of sense. Lots to think about. And the occasional one-liner. "I can remember roses but not pussies" - priceless! :) Hoping for a second chapter - got you tagged in faves!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

The End! I hope not this story deserves at least one more chapter.

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I enjoy writing tales with memorable characters and a deeper meaning, so if you're just looking for a stroke story, you might look elsewhere. That said, you'll find some pretty hot sex in most of my stories. Reader emails and other forms of feedback are welcome! Best regards,...