All Comments on 'Awakenings Ch. 02'

Each chapter increases my interest in this story.

I understand that Tahir is in the USA (although I do not recognize that name as American) and that the doctor, Natasha and Demetri are from Eastern Europe. I'm not clear yet the role of Natasha, I do not know if she's an enemy or a friend ...

Captain Roberts seems a good person, but I'm not sure, the fact that he employs his daughter in a war of mind control does not seem very paternal to me ... Maybe it's my imagination.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

Keep up the great work

More give me more!

Just like all your other stuff.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thank you.

I can't wait to see more. I'm enjoying everything you've put up so far. Keep'em coming!

I like the fast pace of the story line. The way this is going, the characters that matter can be filled in over a number of chapters so keep the pace up.

HIMSELF! HIMSELF! HIMSELF, not his self!