All Comments on 'aZiaN PLaYa Ch. 02'

very nice second chapter...

cant wait for the 3rd one!

kudos!

while the writer uses women as fuck-tools, he seems to be learning and getting a better attitude.

Look forward to next chapter - much better than the usual writing one finds on this site.

You can definitely write your story - but the male centre of the story is a truely repulsive character. As much as I enjoyed the sex in the story, his arrogance and irritating attitude was a real turn off.

Forget what every one else is saying all the characters are great and the story is top notch. Keep this great tale alive and write many, many more chapters! This is the first story I have read with an asian male lead who is care free and funny. And yea he is kinda rude but fuck it he's young and fictional. Although man I gt flashbacks reading this stuff and what he does to women! Great stuff man!

thats what seems to be the eventual conclusion

and yet very cool. I love the honesty, while he may play some games, he's not fooling himself.

Except with his servant, of course :)

Jason