All Comments on 'Baby Sister Pt. 01'

by Cowboy_Bill

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Begs for a sequel

Loved it thinking I know what may come next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
too short

likable but too short

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sexy Bill

Give Bill some chest hair. Make him sexy and muscular man for Jenna and maybe for Jessica too!

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 7 years ago
Seduction?

A young military guy, naked just after a shower, gets accosted by a beautiful 18 year-old doll! Nice fantasy, not much drama, however! How is he in a different room from her brother? Nothing (much) more about Big Bro, and certainly THAT, and Bro's concern (totally abused) about Sis getting chased by Horny Dogs, is how this tale STARTED! But that issue between Our Hero(?) and Big Bro is not addressed again!

3*

Wonder how his friend(?) will feel about his Brother in Arms nailing Sis AND Mom? Great way to get a 'friendly-fire' bullet in your ass (better, crotch!) next rotation.

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