All Comments on 'Babydoll Ch. 19'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Great continuation of the story. I hope by the way Ashley greeted Jim at the door means she starting want to be with Jim. They need to be together happily ever after and soon!!

sadiebrattsadiebrattover 9 years ago

Okay this is starting to drag out. Jim is turning into an ass by continuing to screw Jill. If he's really in love with Ashley he should just lay it all out to her or else move on. So could you please just already let Ashley and Jim get together. After all they are perfect for each other.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Sadness and joy

I know this story is supposed to be fictional but I have to admit it has touched me deeply. I love my wife to hell and back but there is one little piece of my heart that still belongs to another. She was my first and I have loved her since we were children. She is my first cosin. It's funny how mother nature works. You can't help what the member of the oposet sex you fall in love with. But through law, society and the way we where raised we couldn't be together. I've not read this chapter in its fullness yet. It was you bringing up the song if you can't be with the one you love honey love the one you're with. I don't think it's coincidental that her and her husband live in the same year model and type of home that my wife and I live in. I don't believe that it's coincidental that she has three babies the first two boys and the baby is a girl because I have three babies the first two boys and the baby is a girl. I don't think it's coincidental that her wedding was almost identical to mine. I don't think it's coincidental that husband is almost identical to what my wife's husband is (me) to her. I can't help that my sweet wife is almost identical to her. Mother nature can be a bitch but she always knows how to put the puzzle together. I find it funny how my first love and my life dance parallel to each other but we can't be together. I'll probably never see it but I do hope that the laws change like it did for same sex couples so we can be with the one we love

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Fuck the smoking weed bullshit. It ruins the whole story and makes them into asses!

James G 5James G 58 months ago

The whole exchange where Jim goes on about smoking pot makes no sense, Jill smoked with Jim & Ash a couple of chapters ago, she knows he smokes.

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