All Comments on 'Babydoll Ch. 27'

You are awesome! I get my happy ever after! Thank you! Thank you! You have made my day!!!!

fantastic read, I just loved it. Of course there could be more to this story and even a mutual happy ending for Ashley,Jill and Matt.

Wouldn't that be nice too?

thanks for writing this and please keep it up!

Through this winding yarn, true love shines through to the end. I can't help but to wonder how it will all work out. Maybe Jill knows how much Jim needs Ashley. Maybe she knows how much Ashley needs Jim. Maybe she's willing to look the other way.

You sex scenes are always so hot!

So much like a long, classic, romantic story... Almost nori-ish, if that's a word... Outside of rare uses of words like "diddled" & "poon", which doesn't match the maturity of the majority.

Why couldn't it just of stayed between them. Why all the other crap. Write more with them together as head of the family

Great storie line I have readed a lot of these on here and this one is by far the best one there needs to more had to be

I really enjoyed that immensely , lots of twists , characters were believable , would like like may be a couple more chapters, possibly explaining BIGS roll and hold over people , I also think that Jill would accept Ashley somehow living with her and Jim .

One of the best I have ever read, even second time around it was great. I think there are some loose ends you need to tie up though. Where do they go from here? Jusy how do they make this work so they can have it all? Does ash fall pregnant again?

What an incredible journey. I am going to miss this story. I am addicted to this plot. I couldn't stop reading this. Please write more of this. There are so many endless possibilities to move forward. Does Jill find out? Does the mother find out? The grandparents are old and Jim is in Big's old position. Jim can do whatever he wants now. They are obviously the loves of one another's lives. How can they be together? How could they ever be kept apart?

Godamn, just read a quick story to rub one out.. figured this would be the same.. took me a couple weeks, never rubbed one out..very good story.. Jesus Christ, keep me on edge the whole time.. major props..

So Emotional

What a great story, I will miss reading the story of their lives. Hope that there will more to the story written. I happy that Jim and Ash finally got together again and plan on staying together.

BABYDOLL IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I READ IN A LONG TIME. ITS ROMANTIC, DRAMATIC, AND EROTIC. PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORIE OF JIMMY AND ASH

One of the best stories I have Read.

This is the best story I have read so far out of sll the incest stories I have read the brother and sister where into each other as though they where married. I just loved it even though I thought it was a little long.

You had me at Babydoll! I loved the well developed story. I hope their will be more to cum!

I read this story a long time ago. It took years to be brought to conclusion. So, I read your new series Sweet as Sugar at the beginning of the year. That one is awesome and can't wait for more of it, Please Hurry. After finishing Chapter 3 of Sugar, I decided to go back and read Babydoll the whole way through. Honestly, even though I remembered most of it, in ways it was hotter the second go-round.

I want to recommend this to anyone who wants something that will give you all kinds of feelings. This thing will take you through all kinds of emotions, and with some turmoil, but it will definitely get your rocks off multiple times. The scenes are vivid and highly erotic. I truly highly recommend!!!

U can't leave us hanging. What happen next with ash & mommy??,,,?,?,????????

The follow up sequel is the story Sweet as Sugar, which is currently in progress.

Their evil Mom who lost her love tried to tear the. Apart….even you, you bastard! You put them through Hell!

But, true love cannot be killed! It is the one thing I have learned…like a dog loves their human more than they love themself…..Jim & Ash will have their love and can be together for life! Shit, he could sell the practice and they could live in South America very comfortable forever!

It has been over 3 months since I read this, or most of it. I got so damn mad I threw my I-pod and broke it. I keep next to the bed to remind to stop reading sadistic stories quicker! So much for “free Literotica “.

I came back to tell the Author I STILL am having occasional nightmares about how these two were so brutally abused mistreated and generally shit on!!

There is a reason the incest stories do not all end with, :”and they were convicted of incest, he went to prison where the gangs ass raped him for his 7 year stay. Upon release HE had to register as a sex offender which ruined his law career.”

This is the best story I ever red.

I hope your other stories will be so good as this one.

Very well done!

I have read this entire story and have pivoted between being pissed off at Jimmy for basically raping Ash in the beginning, to hoping they find a way, to pissed at Jimmy for being such a shit to Jill, to satisfied that while Ash was the tragic character, she found someone in the end, and now back to pissed at both of them. Jimmy doesn’t deserve Jill.

I just found this story. And I have to admit,I had mixed feeling about it from the beginning. As I continued on my opinion seem to change about Jimmy and Ashley. I was really mad at there mother for doing what she did to them. As I read on things being to change more and more. I could not stop reading, I was hooked! I had no idea there were so many chapters,but I couldn't stop. So I wound up bing reading until I finished. The story line is different. But extremely well written.now that Ashley and Jimmy are finely back together. I wonder what will happen with Jill? Ashley and Jimmy do fully love each other. ,but Jill and their daughter deserve better. I could almost see Jill allowing this to go on because she knows what took place between the brother and sister long before she came into the picture.At one point I even thought that Mom and Ashley would share Jimmy, and life out ther loves together. When Jill intered the picture and became his girlfriend ,it could have changed from family love and girlfriend love to one big family that Jimmy would take care of ,and they would all have separate days with Jimmy. There are so many avenues that could have even considered between them. I almost wish this story would continue as one big happy family until they were Big Daddies age . I was shocked (at myself) quite often as to my emotions coming into play and actually had tears running down my face ,that Ashley and Jimmy couldn't find a way to be together permanently. Excellent story...Excellent writing, and one hell of an imagination by the writer! I will be subscribing to this author to read more of these stories!

I loved every minute of this story I was so angry with the mother for tearing apart such a good love between brother and sister..

She separated them. Got between them. She deserves to be punished.