by 1000dreams
Can't wait for next installment as loved this. You don't need graphic accounts, using your imagination to create the scene being described makes it so more erotic. Love the theme also as I have often dreamt of this type of scenario. Went as far as visiting somebody once but it was not what I envisaged, it was just about putting a nappy on me and seeing how long before I peed myself. Might have been unlucky with my choice but never been to anybody since. If they could give me something like you describe then who knows. Still wet in my knickers from this story.
Pacing of story is great, grabbed my interest and kept me involved in the way all the participants reacted. Look forward to more!
Not bad, your style of writing reminds me of how I pace myself. It felt completely different to how other stories in this form go. Interesting, almost genuine with the characters.
YOU HAVE a very good foundation for the story,now the challenge is to FLESH it out ,make it so when the reader reads it it pops in their head in 3D.
I really don't like your depiction of autism. I know it's probably not something most people care about but it jerks me right out of a real hot story when something like that comes up