All Comments on 'Baby's 18th Birthday with Daddy'

Hope we'll soon find out what's in the room. Great story. Thanks.

Any chance Baby can meet Dad in sexy lingerie, stockings, heels?

What a lucky father. Just as it should be mind, who better to teach a child than her father.

Hi Anonymous:

Thank you for your comment. I'm sure Baby would love to wear high heels and stockings, etc. In fact, she would want to develop quite a selection. I'll be sure to include your idea in the next chapter of Baby's and Daddy's story. Since this is the first erotic story I've written, it will take me a bit of time to add to their saga. Thank you for reading and, again, for your idea.

I'm new at writing erotica. This is my first attempt. I appreciate your reading my work and your comments. I'm sure all the authors do. Feedback always helps us to better craft our efforts. Again, thank you.

Such a WONDERFUL birthday! Daddy gives such great presents. ;)

It's nice to read a story like this where the characters are not useing abusive language. The way they show how much they care for each other in word and action.

I am beginning to wonder about that room in the basement. Does Daddy have some dastardly reason for it, like imprisoning his slut daughter in it for his own devilish plans, or is it simply a beautiful bedroom that they can make wonderful memories in? Maybe only time will tell.

I'm guessing that the room in the basement is a dungeon. All set up for BDSM play that the dad and late mother participated in. It's not hard to figure out.

cant wait to read more and find out what daddy got in store for his slut of his daughter

love the details put into the things she's waited lusting for. and a bdsm basement's so cliche try something unexpected

Not bad for a 1st try !!!!!!!!

A most excellent story, very surprized this is your first time. I simply adored it and it turned me totally on. I am totally wet! When will you be doing another chapter?

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Don't be crazy. We can't do anything. We're father and daughter. Society has its taboos and anything happening between us is one of them."

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That seems an odd first response from a dad, lol! ...and I just don't see him using the word taboo either, hehe.

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I know the mechanics. Tonight I want to know love. What greater experience can there be than for two people who love each other to explore and bring the other to such delight and fulfillment."

"You didn't learn those words in sex ed!"

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No, theres this class called 'english' and this evil book called 'dictionary' that they make us read daddy! My little pussy just gets so wet watching Sesame Street and learning to sound out the words daddy!! ;)

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"You're not using that language around me. Only a slut talks like that and my virgin daughter better never be slutty."

He jerked me up, tore off my panties, threw me over his knees and starting spanking me, his big hand landing hard on my ass cheeks.

"I didn't give you your 18 whallops yet and you're getting them now," he growled, sounding angrier than I've ever heard him.

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Ow, ow ow!! Daddy, daddy look!! See up there, on the shelf? See that little red light? Thats a web camera with audio thats uploading live footage and sound of what you're doing to me right now to a secure server! Don't touch it! There are two other people besides me that have access to the videos, if you touch it then they'll take the video and you go to jail! I tried doing this the easy way but since you're being stubborn we'll do it the hard way! First you'll start by licking my sore ass till it feels better, then we'll see about you licking my pussy and take things from there!

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"And fourth, I want to know what's in that room in the basement you keep locked."

"I'm not sure you're ready now. We'll move slowly toward that revelation. Will that be ok?"

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Uh-oh!! Daddy's a huge sick, twisted pervy guy!! Rofl!! Don't go down there without witnesses, lol!!

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He pushed a finger into me, then two fingers.

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Wups!! There goes her hymen, rrrrrrrip!! Daddy's big fat fingers ruined the prize!

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Baby, are you sure you want this? Once I make you my slut, you've committed yourself forever.

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Daddy! Where did you learn potty mouth words like that?? Sluts fuck more than one person daddy, whores sell it. I need to loan you my dictionary daddy!!

Hehehe, well that was a really fun short story! Thanks for writing for us!!

great story, but a cliff hanger like this needs another end ,, so what is the secret in there ,, well written.. keep on writing.

baby daughter discovers her bondage delights behind THAT door...mmmm

What secrets lie in the basement?