All Comments on 'Babysitter Abandoned'

great plot, build up, and smooth transition from not wanting to have sex to an orgasm. love your writing style.

one thing to consider is that formal conversations, especially not using contractions, makes it a bit awkward and clumsy.

Well written and a nice twist on the usual 'fucking the babysitter' stories. Dialogue a bit clumsy in places, but that didn't spoil it for me and I'd love to read a sequel.

A sequel to the story would be nice.

This is definitely one of my favorites of your stories. Can’t help but play with my clit while reading. Mmm

Great seduction. Great story line. I still would like see the wife more involved

Well, when the girl sets herself up to be caught in flagrante delicto, what is the poor couple to do? Another well thought out and written story in this series. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Love humor and Sex mixed together. “Teach your children well”.