by Ashson
Maybe you'd be better off going back to non-con.
You come across as an utter creep. Not that I believe a word of your story.
This came off as terrible. No one talks that way. Its like the author fancies himself wily but in teality just comes off pompous. And then I saw the author. No surprise...
it they get so upset by stories which are figments of the writer's imagination?
I would guess that it is probably jealousy because they have so little imagination themselves!
This is the 2nd story of yours I have read. Your prose is very easy to read! And you achieve a particular degree of humour that definitely contributes to that. Very good :)
Why are comments rude? It wasn't way off base, it's erotic stories, so this was erotic. Who wouldn't want a babysitter to be desired and naked. Hell, I've wanted that.. Good story. I like it for what it was.