All Comments on 'BabySitter and the Liar'

by Ashson

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sirhugssirhugsover 9 years ago
Does Joy get to share the joy?

Seems suspicious to me that wifey conveniently went upstairs. I bet she planned this...

ChrisTor22ChrisTor22over 9 years ago
Welcome back!! LOL

Missed your daily contributions....duck hunting?? Another very cute vignette...as soon as I saw "Babysitter...." in the titles, I knew it had to be you!! LOL I agree with Anon... wifey could definitely be a star in Chapter 2... I was almost surprised after the climax NOT to find her watching from the door!! Keep up the great work!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Ashson!!!!!

Will you PLEASE Proof Read and remove the errors!!

They're distracting!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
TO anonymous

You're reading a story written in British English Wanker - Get used to it!!!

maddictmaddictover 9 years ago
She missed

Missed her movie, does she miss her period too. Just a reminder boys, notning spoils a party like a baby.

I also expected the wife and not movie credits to catch her eye. Oh the night is as young as she was?......

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