by Ashson
This is a bit too possible a young naive babysitter getting raped by the dad an forcing her to keep quiet didn’t find it erotic found it uncomfortable
Would have been a lot better if for once you hadn't made such a big thing of the babysitter getting into it as well - then her defeat at the hands of the wife would have been all the sweeter.
There are a lot of lousy stories but this is a good one. One of the things that is most of a turn-on is that the wife is willing and an encourager.
One of your greatest stories!
Non-consent/releuctance can be equal to rape. I found no problems with this. : )
Nonconsent, yes, reluctance, yes. But this needs a rape tab attached. This is more than just normal erotic rape fantasy, this is too possible and needs that forewarning. Not horribly written, just needs more character build up.