by Ashson
... that the author damaged the best story of his I've read with the too common bull shit about the hymen.
Otherwise a first rate story
He calls her 'Tracy' once instead of 'Trudi.' Rather distracting. Not bad, though, overall.
The end of the story 'Oh, dear. I was going to fret now, expecting him to jump me while I was there. What if he didn't? Would I be disappointed or relieved? Oh, hell, I didn't know,' makes it sound like you have idea for these two t have another chapter. I hope to read it!
so basically if i go and rape a girl she will be okay with it so long as i keep on fucking her and afterwards she will want me to rape her again... Okay... Unless she forplanned this rape she should not have been so happy getting fucked.
I did enjoy the babysitter series, again great writing. Wished there had been more closure for each story told. Enjoying your one-shot stories. Can see each of them being turned into series stories.