All Comments on 'Babysitter Rin'

by Sean Renaud

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nighthawk22204nighthawk22204about 1 month ago

Good beginning; where's the Rest of the Story?

JUSTANERDJUSTANERDover 4 years ago
WTF

Not long enough and more could be added to this story please add more

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Stopped just when it got good. Great start. These are fun and aggravating at the same time; argh! Haha

Jonny_BluelineJonny_Bluelineover 10 years ago
Fun Story

It's unrealistic for an 18-year-old to have a babysitter but you make the premise fun, regardless. I like that he isn't an idiot; Rin asks him what sexual act he wants and he immediately asks for a blow job.

I eagerly await your next chapter. 5 stars!

Matt450Matt450over 10 years ago
Great story

Great first part of the story! I hope that you keep it going, definitely looking forward to it!

PunjiPunjiover 10 years ago
Great Start

Well written. Sex is good. Fantasy without being too unrealistic. I appreciate that you didn't decide to go with the standard "he had a 15 inching cock that was 8 inches around" that makes the entire thing so unrealistic.

I really can't wait for the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
enjoyable

good read, cant wait for next part

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