All Comments on 'BabySitter Substitute'

by Ashson

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
You do write some interesting stories, but ....

I do wish you'd leave out the errors!!

"... no tiffs in site. "?

Don't you mean 'sight'??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
awesome story

I was not distracted by any tiny errors and really enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
male version

Ashson please switch back to writin as a male -- there are a lot more men readin this and it just reads better when you write it in that tone/form -- A FAN

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Perfect

I've read many of your works, and I do have to say I'm quite impressed. I love how you experiment with the points of veiws, and the details are great. I will continue reading anything you write; great job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Good for her

Way to make them pay !

CyJmy69CyJmy69over 6 years ago
Fine w reluctance but not rape

Again, like your stories BUT I enjoy reluctance stories but not focusing on rape.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Rape

Always fun to take a sitter or another man’s wife

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