by Ashson
we can say you never wrote a GOD story!! gave this a 5 too
VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT MORON VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON! REPORT THE TRANNY BITCH'S RANTS, PEOPLE!!! IT JUST TAKES 1 SECOND!
Good story. Simple nice decent story. Lots of ways to build on this.
It's funny seeing all of you "anons" bitching at one another for being anonymous. Kinda stupid.
And, yes, the writing in this tale is of poor quality.