All Comments on 'BabySitter's Dream'

by Ashson

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lydiayokomotolydiayokomotoover 7 years ago
This made me laugh

Your description of the kids was wonderful. Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
LOVED IT

I LOVED this cute short realistic happy story. It reminded me of my earliest sexual fantasies. After I got date raped I still had these same fantasies but even WAY more vivid and detailed. Since my first rape was non-violent and shockingly pleasurable, I was pretty much fine with rape and fantasized on getting raped repeatedly by every man and boy I knew. I had a babysitting rape fantasy that was basically this story.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 7 years ago
Not bad at all but ...

I missed Ashson's gift for rhetoric and double-edged discourse flaring and flaming all the brighter because the outcum' is already assured.

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