All Comments on 'Babysitting'

I'm hoping this is pure fantasy; if not, your story left me pissed more than turned on. Your father's best friend destroy's his trust like that?

Don't overthink it...Either it turned you on or it didn't. Get off the judgemental high horse. People who come into a fantasy site getting pissed off at the lack of morals are more twisted than the people who just come here to get off.

Cleraly this is fantasy, as all of my stories so far have been.

And even if it wasn't she's a consenting adult. Yes she was seduced a little, but she gave in of her own accord, she wasn't forced, so who cares who the older guys was?

This is a hot fantasy, and that's it! There are at least a hundred babysitter stories here on Lit, and they all have some key features in common at least:

a) older man/younger woman

b) cheating husband

c) seducing the other partner who may not have thought about the other sexually before

Relax, it's a story! Good work Jade!

Hot story, well written... I think it could have been improved a little by adding some more detail to the sex scene... but otherwise excellent. Also, people that object to the morality of a story on an erotic story site are hypocritcal and just plain stupid. Don't let the idiot stop you from writing. Thanks for the hard work and for sharing. Please keep writing.

But you really need am editor to correct typos -- not necessarily misspellings, but the substitution of one word for another.

And a more foreplay building up slowly to the intercourse and oral/anal or whatever would make things better.

I love your writing! Especially The Train Ride! I am so hooked on that story I can't wait for the next chapter. I thought this story was just as hot. I wish I babysat for a man like that! WOW

So he fucked you without even knowing if you were on birth control? How erotic!!!

Very erotic. No regard for Birth Control until it was too late? That's the best way. I enjoy doing this and then letting my woman know that she cannot get pregnant from me anyhow. That usually turns loose all the pussy juice that she can offer for future fuckings.

Obviously the Pill is missing in this coupling, so maybe the babysitter will have some rug rats of her own to watch in the future????

This was good, but the length was was too short and the story would have benefited greatly with more seduction and foreplay added into it.

...so you're with kids to another man and having an affair?

you cunt

A nice, but limited short story.