All Comments on 'Bachelor Party (Jennifer)'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
well done

This was an intelligent story with a nice touch of tension. actually erotic in the sense of the possibility of transgression

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
potential improvement

i would like it to be a little more raunchy, perhaps touching?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
boring

vapid little tale. zero eroticism or drama. a waste of time

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