Back Alley Rape

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This is my first story. Do not be very harsh, however, some constructive criticism is perfect to help out with a new story soon.

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You're walking home one late afternoon. The streets begin to dwindle down as the glow of the setting sun shines on the nearest car window. You get blinded by the glare of the windshield. As you cover your eyes from the sun's reflection, your mouth is covered by an unknown large hand, pulling into a shadow filled alley. Your muffled screamed and failed attempts to get free only force the man to force a kiss on you. He forcefully moves his tongue into your mouth to keep you quiet.

After his forceful kiss, your attempts to break free cease as your muffled screams turn into pitiful whimpers. "Get on your knees," He tells you in a gruff, lust filled voice. You slowly get on them, wanting to not piss him off. He grabs a large handful of your hair, taking precautions to make sure you would not escape. He slowly unzips his pants and unbuttons them, revealing his naked waist and hairy pelvis.

Your eyes instantly fall on his blood gorged member and heavy set of balls. In your mind, you are terrified from the look of his cock, but your body betrays you as your panties grow wet. You clamp your mouth down tightly, sealing it so he would not be able to force his cock in it. It doesn't seem to piss him off, however, it does seem to annoy him. He leans down and pinches your nostrils together, smiling as he slowly waits. After several quick moments, you open your mouth quickly to regain some oxygen. Bad Move.

The man thrusts his large cock into your mouth. Tears begin to swell around your eyes as your mouth was being violated by him. "Suck it bitch," He says with a victorious voice. "If you so happen to bite this cock, I swear to whoever, I'll knock out all of your teeth, fuck your mouth, and make you into the whore of this fucking city. Go it bitch?"

You instantaneously nod with his cock in your mouth. You slowly suck his cock, hearing his soft moans. His soft moans soon give way as you continue to suck at the same speed. You look up, but his eyes quickly fill with anger, as he pulls on your hair in his hands. "Why the fuck are you sucking like this you stupid slut?" He asked in a very pissed mood. "You know what? I'm taking control now."

He roughly thrusts his cock into the back of your throat, filling the tight cavity with his cock. You begin to gag on the member, crying from him abusing your mouth. Tears escape from your eyes as you feel like a slut from getting abused by him.

After what seemed like eternity, his cock began to throb. Your eyes grow largely, filling with fear. With one final thrust, he grabs both sides of your head. Large portions of cum soon fills your mouth and throat. As more and more keeps coming out, your mouth over exceeds the limit of cum it can hold and a large portion of that cum falls on your outfit and breasts, soaking them in the semen.

You softly cry once again, but this time, you also heave a sigh of relief as his grip softens. You keep your eyes closed for a moment, thinking that you can now be free. However, you open up after several moments and see that his cock is standing up straight, as if he never came. Your worst fear is realized as you fully realize that he intend on fucking your cunt.

"Get naked whore," He says with a dark smile on his face. You slowly strip down naked, softly crying once again. Once you are fully naked, a flash is shown. You look at the man and notice a phone in his hand. You begin to cry harder as you have pictures taken of you. "Act out once, and I'll post these pictures across the web," The man said as you kept crying. "Now, quit your crying and bend over that box bitch."

You obey his commands, and bend over the box, having your ass and stomach pressed against the box as your ass was facing him. You slowly feel a touch of wetness run down your thigh. Your body has fully betrayed you as your pussy was fully wet from all what happened. You slowly cry more, but as you do, you feel your body wanting him, wanting to be fucked by his rigid cock.

Without a second thought, the man thrusts his cock deeply into your pussy, surprised it has slipped in your pussy with barely any resistance. He began to thrust roughly, torturing your body as you feel him using you. However, with each thrust, you begin to moan out in pleasure. His thrusts slap against your ass, pounding it. With each thrust that you feel, your moans grow more and more.

You turn your head to see the man with a camera out, recording you being fucked. Instead of you being scared and afraid, you blow a soft kiss to the camera and moan like a slut for it.

"Fuck me more and more! Make this pussy a toy for you, and I'll be a slut for you! I'll fuck whoever you want me to fuck! I'll fuck for money. I'll fuck as your slut!"

He gave a soft smirk, knowing that he broke your mind.

"You're gonna be the best slut in this damn city," He said as he began to thrust harder and deeper, hitting your g-spot. Your moans grow even fiercer until you climax on his cock. As you finally reached your climax, his cock throbs inside of you, wanting to paint your insides white. "Tch.. I'm gonna cum slut! Where do you want me to release this cum you treasure so much?"

"On my face! On my slutty, slutty face!" You scream out as he pulls his throbbing cock out of your pussy. You quickly get on your knees in front of him, and jerk off his cock roughly. Without a single thought of wanting anything else but his cum, you open your mouth as a load of cum is sprayed onto your face and some of it lands into your mouth.

"You are my master, from here until you get bored of me," You say with your cum covered face.

"And I will be sure to use you always use you like the slut you are," He says with a smirk on his face. "Now give a kiss for the camera, slut."

"Gladly." You give the camera a small kiss as cum still resides on your face.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
First person narrative pls

Nice!, but IMHO iit should narrate from first person pov, and on past tense maybe.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Don't listen to the first guy

Second person is amazing, and also so much harder to find than first and third, therefore making more people attracted to your work due to the rarity of the POV.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I actually really like the second person telling. It's like there's someone whispering in my ear, telling me what they're going to do to me. It's really hot.

The actual story itself doesn't flow the best, but the idea is good. Keep writing!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good..

But it was just so, rushed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
enjoyable

I liked the dialogue between the two characters. I agree the transformation was a little fast but that said -- this is just a personal preference -- I really enjoy second person stories. With some more detail this would've been sensational.

I_Enjoy_Your_StoriesI_Enjoy_Your_Storiesalmost 9 years ago
Great first effort.

I enjoyed the premise of this story, because I like my stories to be a bit dark, but I will agree with the others - too abrupt how she changes. It would have been best if she didn't.

Also the second person narrative isn't to my liking either - not that its a wrong device to use - that's just my own personal preference.

Keep writing. You are doing well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Don't use second person.

Use first person or third. Second is distracting and crude.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
You

I do not like it when it is written like this.. if you used "I" or "she" it would have been better..

I also agree with the others.. it is going way to fast... there is no time to get into it.. feeling the fear.... know what I mean?

Work on it.. I think you have great potential tho..... ☺

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Repetitive language

Stopped reading after the beginning.

force...force....forcefully...forceful

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
too fast

She liked it way too fast. She goes from being raped to wanting him to be her master in 2 seconds. Way too unbelievable even for this site.

Also there was not enough detail about the actual fucking. What did it feel like when his cock violated her? Was it too big and hurt? What did she hear? Smell? See? You can't just say he fucked her until she came.

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