All Comments on 'Back Dive Ch. 09'

It would be fantastic if you got your head out of your ass and learnt basic anatomy! The hymen is at the entrance to the vagina not half way fucking in, Sullivan has already taken her damn virginity, but not when he's half way in and bumped into something, though judging by everything else you've claimed, especially with Sarah saying she has to stay upright to prevent getting pregnant, you've lived a life believing bullshit about sex.

You have written 2 very naive people, one who is supposedly in college and should know more than what he says he does, which seems to be nothing at all. I'm guessing you'd blame being a country girl for Sarah being naive, since that's why you said she couldn't do a back dive, I'm surprised you had her able to swim at all.

Surely it would have been a bit more believable if Sullivan had gone and bought condoms instead? neither one of them is smart enough, to think of more than just getting pregnant with unprotected sex? or maybe they just haven't reached the part in the book that covers that?

If your going to be critical at least be constructive and leave your name. I enjoyed the innocence of the characters and I am pretty sure that the Hymen can be near the opening or back further based on how the girl's body is.

Strawberry I like the story and took it as it was meant to be taken. Thanks, I liked it alot.

Scurvy

Scurvydog, it doesn't 'depend on the girl' as to where their hymen is. Considering I'm female and know where it is located and the majority of men have no freaking idea of female anatomy I'm not surprised yet another male writer or another male commenting on it knows where it is.

All of this is very educational concerning the location of a hymen. I thought the location in the story was being measured in relation to the guy's dick. So for you guys with a big dick, it's right at the entrance. For us little-dicked guys, it seems like it's halfway in there!

BTW, Sarah had said she didn't have a hymen anymore. I think Sullivan was just stretching through a tight spot, not through a hymen.

Oh yeah, I enjoyed the story. The swimming and diving brought back old memories. There were some funny spots. And the beginning and ending were especially nice.

Even though there wasn't much "real" sex in this story, the foreplay between several characters, was out of this world. You captured the essence of sexual buildup that eventually leads to amazing orgasms. Incredibly well done. You may have used their names a few too many times for me, when he/she would have sufficed, but that's more picky than necessary. Great job! I loved it.😊

This has been a fun read, nicely romantic. Like others who have commented, the hymen is at the opening of the vagina and she had already lost that. The one thing that seemed “over the top” was Sullivan purchasing contraceptive foam for his soon to be lover. He showed her no respect by purchasing something she may not like or want to use. He also told her that birth control was NOT his responsibility! What a dolt! Buy a box of condoms, you idiot!!

A great story!

For all you anatomy "experts" the hymen is not in the same place for every female.

This is FICTION not a medical lesson.

Her hymen could be in her backside in this story if that is what the author wanted. Such is the poetic license of fictional authors!!

AND some women do not have one at all!

Great story, despite those perfect authors who live to be critics.

If you need that level of technical correctness, pay for an edited book.