All Comments on 'Back from the Gym'

Nice job for first time out. I like the way the story was told first person by the celeb, instead of the other way around. Good luck on future stuff!

Really good story, just a little short for my taste. Please keep writing!

No need 2 use Mr. Osbournes' name @ all, since there was NO evidence that it was him, until you threw his name out there @ the end of a painfully truncated story! You really ought to treat the old guy with more respect than that. I mean, he DID revolutionize Rock & Roll, after all! This was a horrible story that was completely pointless & I found insulting as a fan of Mr. John Michael Osbourne (YES, that's Ozzy's real name, Dammit)! Get a clue, child. Please give the people you write about the honour that they deserve, if you are going to include our idols in your smut! Truly tasteless crap. I shall be certain to avoid looking @ NE of your OTHER work, if I see your name on it! BOO, HISS. :(