All Comments on 'Back Home for the Summer'

Healthy, sexy people with a relaxed attitude about nudity and sexuality. Please write more about them.

I agree with the other comments - more, please. Interesting plot with some twists, good writing skills and competent editing. Great first effort

Sorry, plot and descriptions of each 'part' are far too 'segmented' to follow. Seemed to jump around from one partial piece of the story to another - was never a smooth transition to any of it. Try doing a complete, smooth story line where things tie together from one scene to another.

Yes, Please more of this story!

I want Tess to get some cock and maybe Stella also.

hoop to see more chapters

Thanks for the encouragement and feedback. I'll get this story to an editor, so an update will follow.

really well written, thanks for taking the time to share