All Comments on 'Back in the Game'

Fantastic, more of that style of writing please.

I loved the way the daughter got to her dad. Our daughter,s first time was with her dad. She came in the bedroom and got on her dad as we sleep .

Both of us woke to see her mouth it .

Great story. One mistake he came off the bed (Tess massage)not the table.

You can develop more game stories like college football games. The three weeks at Christmas, then Spring Break, and then the long hot summer months (mountains,nude beaches, or at home). Find out more about Tess's family life. Marry Tess someday as Lisa's new MOM. And they continue their love affair (Tess and Lisa). Are they now (Christmas time)on birth control or do they want talk about have his babies together someday.

You did a great story continue the writing even if your college professor did not see a good story in front of him. OLD FUDDY DUDDY. You got a writer mind.

and yes Gary, you're right about the mistake re table/bed, that is annoying! Apologies.

I'd love to hear more of this story, maybe with the girls getting pregnant at the end.

Good development, lead up and......Well, I'll wait for the next chapter. I HOPE there will be another one?...

I plan to read your other story. I let you Know.

Wow. This story was amazing. Don't end it here, it feels like this story may have some long-term point.

More and more of this please no soon like yesterday, so fucing sexy, the lucky fucker two hot young cunts to suck and fuck. Cuntlapping sex maniac UK.

Great build up. Enough hints to give the action later some context, but they're done subtly enough that it's not overly obvious where things are going to go.

Your narrator's self-consciousness is believable and sympathetic, and the playfulness of the girls is very appealing. Great story. No sequel is necessary. It's perfect as is.

One man, two teenage cunts, life doesn't get much better. Hope he fucks them both

Love the story line and the plot but it would all flow just a bit better if the guy, laying on his bed, on a large towel with one over his butt, gets up off the table when done? Later same scenario, not drunk but the room span? My spelling is totally spell check, and my punctuation hit and miss, but I speed read about 70 books a year and I send emails to publishers when I find errors while reading. I do not have the imagination or talent to be able to give birth to a story on paper but admire those that can. I read because I enjoy it and I enjoy your stories but would even more if not for the errors. Hope you receive this in the way I intended, as helpful, not caustic. Cheers

Thanks for sharing.

I loved your story, but wish it were longer to cover sll of the activities they discussed: fucking Tess, Lisa sucking his cum out of Tess, then fucking Lisa. Reactions the next morning at the breakfast table and so on until the girls boarded the plane to leave. Maybe even making plans for a return visit

Yes, you made that very clear in the intro, and that any further action was to be the product of the readers' imaginations.

Really? Have you any idea how depraved some of those imaginations are?

That aside, thank you for a wonderful story.

HOT HOT HOT!!!!

LOVED IT! You are one horny bastard!!!!

every mans dream,fucking two sexy girls and one being his daughter

Incest +1, daughter and 'bonus daughter' in a threesome, now that's a fantasy I didn't realize I had! Looking for a sequel or something, has great potential. A very well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Short but very sweet and sexy story, one I think any father with an attractive daughter could imagine.