All Comments on 'Back to Nature'

Great Start. Now Finish It!

The people in your story have absolutely no character whatsoever. You almost never refer to them by their names, instead grouping them in the category of "The Wives" over and over and over again. They lack descriptions, they lack personality, and each one may as well be a clone of the others. Even the werewolves are like that.

-ClanCrusher

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The picture in my head of the women being mounted by the werewolves made me so horny!